Unless
you are writing a very unique sort of fictional book, your characters
are going to have to speak one another.
That means you will need
to do know to write dialogue.
Dialogue
is quite simply the characters speaking to one another. Character
A has a point to make to Character B. Perhaps they argue; perhaps
they want to get a certain point across.
Good
dialogue is more than just what the characters are saying. You
should be able to discern the differences between characters by
their dialogue. Men and women speak differently as a whole, but
not all men or women speak alike.
How
do you decide how to write good dialogue? The simplest way is
to listen. Writers are notorious for eavesdropping on conversations
around them, but this a good way to learn dialogue. Listen to
how your mother speaks, how it is different from your father and
brothers. Listen to your boss.
An
educated person is going to speak a lot differently than someone
who has never been to school. These are useful ways to make the
dialogue sound unique for each character.
However,
be cautious about the overabundance of dialect. Using a thick
Scottish accent or a Southern accent over and over might get a
little annoying after a while. At the same time you might want
to include it the first time a character speaks so the reader
gets the idea of how the character sounds.
Watch
for punctuation in your dialogue. "The quotes come around
the spoken word," she warned.
"But
what if I don't get to finish--"
"You
mean if I interrupt you?" she asked.
"Well,
yes..." His voice tailed off.
In
the final example you will note he stopped talking or paused.
In the first, she cut him off. In both those cases, you also get
examples of the use of what are called "dialogue tags."
"Said" is the most common dialogue tag and often you
don't even need them.
"Stop!"
You
don't need to say "she shouted" in that instance. It's
obvious that whoever is speaking is giving a command. The same
is true if your character is asking a question.
"Where
are you going?"
Unless
you need to identify who is speaking there is no need to follow
that sentence with a "she asked."
Beware
of the use of adverbs in your tags, such as:
"You
are such a jerk," she said coldly.
In
that case you can probably tell the meaning of her words or how
she is speaking to him, unless she is teasing. In which case you
might write that sentence with a descriptive tag:
"You
are such a jerk." She chuckled and smacked his shoulder with
a playful shove.
As noted, said is the most common form of dialogue tag and if you are uncertain about what to use, it is also the safest if you need to differentiate between two characters. Many writers prefer not to use it at all but to use action to note which character is speaking.
"Where are you going?" Her mother stepped in front of the door slowing Ella's mad dash to escape.
"Out to meet some friends." Ella grabbed her purse. She checked her watch. "And I'm running late."
"Will you be home for dinner?" (there is no need for a tag here. We've already established Ella and her mother are the only two speaking._
"Maybe."
Beware of dialogue that is repetitive or useless or that you are
using as an info dump. Don't have two characters suddenly discussing something they would both know about unless you are bringing new information to one or the other.
Exercises for developing dialogue:
- Listen to people around you and watch how they speak and if you can tell the difference from one person to the next
- Try writing out in dialogue a conversation you've had with someone recently
- Listen to different dialects and think of how you would translate that to dialogue
- Study dialogue in published books and see how it is used
- Experiment with dialogue tags
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