| Pacing
is one of those words that can be confusing for a beginning writer,
but it can make a big difference in whether readers like your writing
or whether you even get published.
Pacing
is exactly what it sounds like -- it is the ebb and flow of your
book. Are you writing scene after scene of tension and action?
Is there paragraph after paragraph of narrative or history? Is
there too much dialogue? Too little?
To
make your book move at a good pace, you will want all these things
in your story. You will want exciting, action filled scenes, but
like riding a roller-coaster, sooner or later your readers will
want to catch to catch their breath. If your heroine is chasing
a murderer, sooner or later she will need a few minutes to sit
back and think through the clues.
At
the same time you don't want your book to be so slow that people
will want to put it down after a few pages because there is nothing
but explanation after explanation with no action.
The
key is to provide action, take a short break and then move on.
Dialogue is a good way to keep the pace moving, but if your characters
are just wasting time with their talk, then get the plot moving
again.
Next,
you need to continue to increase the stakes for your main characters.
The action should rise and rise until it gets to the point that
all is either lost or the hero/heroine has to win and save the
day, solve the mystery or commit to each other if it is a romance.
You
should have challenges to your characters all along the way and
there can be ups and downs where the hero/heroine loses a challenge
or reaches a particular high, but the story should continue to
move back and forth until the final resolution at the end.
Problem
areas to watch for in your writing:
-- long periods of backstory - this slows down your work
--paragraph
after paragraph of description or introspection
-- long stretches of dialogue that repeat or do not move the plot
along
-- action scene after action scene without a break
-- long periods of time where a character doesn't interact with
anyone
--long
paragraphs where the story doesn't move forward with a form of
action
Pacing
is also affected by the type of story you are writing. A cozy
mystery or a romance may move slower than an action or suspense
novel. Keep this is mind as you write and later as you go through
and edit your story.
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