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Pacing is one of
those words that can be confusing for a beginning writer, but it can
make a big difference in whether readers like your writing or whether
you even get published.
Pacing is exactly
what it sounds like -- it is the ebb and flow of your book. Are you
writing scene after scene of tension and action? Is there
paragraph after paragraph of narrative or history? Is there too much
dialogue? Too little?
To make your book
move at a good pace, you will want all these things in your story.
You will want exciting, action filled scenes, but like riding a
roller-coaster, sooner or later your readers will want to catch to
catch their breath. If your heroine is chasing a murderer, sooner or
later she will need a few minutes to sit back and think through the
clues.
At the same time
you don't want your book to be so slow that people will want to put it
down after a few pages because there is nothing but explanation after
explanation with no action.
The key is to
provide action, take a short break and then move on. Dialogue is a
good way to keep the pace moving, but if your characters are just
wasting time with their talk, then get the plot moving again.
Next, you need to
continue to increase the stakes for your main characters. The action
should rise and rise until it gets to the point that all is either
lost or the hero/heroine has to win and save the day, solve the
mystery or commit to each other if it is a romance.
You should have
challenges to your characters all along the way and there can be ups and downs where the
hero/heroine loses a challenge or reaches a particular high, but the
story should continue to move back and forth until the final
resolution at the end.
Problem areas to
watch for in your writing:
-- long periods of backstory - this slows down your work
--paragraph after
paragraph of description or introspection
-- long stretches of dialogue that repeat or do not move the plot
along
-- action scene after action scene without a break
-- long periods of time where a character doesn't interact with anyone
--long paragraphs
where the story doesn't move forward with a form of action
Pacing is also
affected by the type of story you are writing. A cozy mystery or a
romance may move slower than an action or suspense novel. Keep
this is mind as you write and later as you go through and edit your
story.
Exercises to check
your pacing:
- Look through books you enjoy
reading; check for the action filled scenes versus narrative or
dialogue
- Go through your writing to look
for spots where you can insert action or places where your
characters need to take a breath
- Watch an action movie and note
the times when the action has to slow
- Note action paragraphs and
narrative-filled passages in your work
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